Changes between Version 515 and Version 516 of WikiStart

Timestamp:

2013-03-01T03:03:46Z (12 years ago)

Author:

davidsarah

Comment:

wording of intro

WikiStart

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         <h1 style="color: #2f8ab5; font-family: helvetica, arial, sans-serif">Welcome to&nbsp<i>The</i> Least-Authority File System</h1>
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-                        <p>Tahoe-LAFS is a Free and Open cloud storage system. It distributes your data across multiple servers. Even if some of the servers fail or are taken over by an attacker, the entire filesystem continues to function correctly, including preservation of your privacy and security.</p>
+                        <p>Tahoe-LAFS is a Free and Open cloud storage system. It distributes your data across multiple servers. Even if some of the servers fail or are taken over by an attacker, the entire filesystem continues to function correctly, preserving your privacy and security.</p>
 <p><a href="/trac/tahoe-lafs/browser/docs/about.rst">A one-page summary</a> explains the unique properties of this system.</p>
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